Saturday, August 30, 2008

movie script ending

this is my second blog entry. the previous blog i wrote -well, typed- about football, and now, i would like to write about movie. yes, movie. why movie ? what movie ? what am i gonna do with that movie ? i let you know after i finish this paragraph. and this paragraph is finished.
living in the city like cyberjaya, honestly, make me want to scream out loud and say "I AM BOREEEEDDDD" . and when i find a new movie, it's just like finding an oasis in the middle of the desert. <==== SIMILE. the last movie that i watched was never back down. it was a fine movie, but it didnt make feel like 'wow, this movie makes me feel great' . that movie was just fine. and thats why, i want to make this movie looks special, classy, and extra ordinary.

here is the real story. about a guy, high school boy who fells guilty about his dad's dead. he tries to run away from the problem by do fights. and there was a time when he, his little brother, and his mom have to move to another city. he had some fights, and he trained to the master of martial arts. and at the end. he won the fights.

so ordinary commercial happy ending movie, isnt it ? so i like to change the story a little bit, to make this movie more interesting. well, for me.


NEVER BACK DOWN v2.01

there is a guy who likes to fight named jake, go to another city because of his brother got a tennis scholarship. (its a real one though). he comes to the new school, the students are good, some not. jake met a mexican-american girl, named baja. bad for jake, baja has a boyfriend named ryan. this ryan is the best fighter in the school, he got skills in karate, jiu jitsu, judo, taekwondo, and other martial arts.

the story goes until jake makes friend with bobby (i made this character), fat, not smart, unpopular student in the school. someday, bobby, got bullied by ryan and the gang. jake can not take it. without permission from bobby, jake challange ryan to fight one on one bareknuckle fight. ryan accept, and later, jake's body covered by blood. yes, jake lose. knowing jake finished, bobby is angry, then he train secretly to martial art master, name frank, a bald, muscular, tattoed and full of anger man.

baja, the beautiful mexican-american girl feels so uncomfort with the ryan-jake relationship. ryan is her boyfriend, and baja admire jake, jake is quite good looking boy.

bobby has finished his training with frank, and planning to have a revenge with ryan. surprised by the challenge that asked by bobby, ryan cannot avoid but to accept the fight. then they fight, watched by baja and jake. bobby is the winner in this fight. but ryan cannot accept it. then he take out his gun from his car, and point the gun toward bobby, but jake sees it. jake pushes bobby and jake get shot by the bullet from the ryan's gun. jake is dead. ryan goes to prison, bobby moves to another city, baja continue her study then become actreess.

thank you very much.

*more information about the movie, just click here

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